Swirl Antara

I don't know how to actually delete posts, so this is my getting rid of my embarassing attempt at poetry

A few edits from before. If you want to tell me to change something eg. description, please give a specific example. No offense to my other reviewers but "Description could ...

This is a story that I won contest with, but I never got any comments on it so tell me what you think please!! Thanks By the way, it's not ...

I can't add the avatar I want from my computer! I've added avatars before and it's not too big, so what's my problem?! Any help would be appreciated! thx Ok, ...

please kind I'm not great at poetry Sometimes time cannot heal We do walk again We heal as much as we can time does not stop for the wounded Although ...

I suppose that my life would be simpler, maybe even happier, if I'd never been bitten. My best friend wouldn't be dead...and I wouldn't have killed her. Somehow though, I ...

I suppose that my life would be simpler, maybe even happier, if I'd never been bitten. My best friend wouldn't be dead...and I wouldn't have killed her. Somehow though, I ...

A fragment from my werewolf story, to read the prologue, go to post277692.html#277692 also, I make at least one reference to 'our' or 'we' in this part, and I'm referring ...

I fear that I am becoming normal I feel like my individuality is being swallowed whole and leaving me an obedient clone I've always wanted to fit in and to ...

This was going to be my entry in a contest before I learned that they only accepted short stories......tell me what you think!! Last evening's light snowfall icing trees' naked ...

So this is a short story that I wrote for a contest last year. The limit was 600 words which is why it's so short. All reviews are welcome! 2. ...

very short, I know an attempt at some rhymes....yeah ---------------------------------------- Raised voices ignore the walls between us and envelope me in a cloud of gloom, Each angry tone and bitter ...

Gears turning slowly, tumblers not working I sit, my hand on my head, glaring at the riddle I can't give up, it will hover in my mind until I relent ...

So I wrote this for english class this weekend and am rather pleased with it. It is a Shakespearean sonnet, so the format is very strict. I don't know for ...

this is a sonnet I wrote, but really needs some work- I'm not sure how to fix it up.any help would be great, as long as you know how to ...